找到提升托福写作速度的突破口 写作中表示喧闹的同义词
【简介】感谢网友“福灵剂”参与投稿，以下是小编为大家准备的找到提升托福写作速度的突破口 写作中表示喧闹的同义词（共7篇），仅供参考，大家一起来看看吧。
篇1：找到提升托福写作速度的突破口 写作中表示喧闹的同义词
对于写作来说，不外乎就是“熟能生巧”这样的一种技能，托福写作也是如此。就好比我们在初入托福备考时完成一篇文章需要2个小时，而随着自己词汇量的不断提升，累积的经典语句，我们的写作速度可能就会慢慢得到提升。而主要耗费时间的过程就是构思和表达，在逐渐熟悉这两步的操作之后，速度逐渐的提升也就并不奇怪了。
当然这样的说法还是比较宽泛的。想要提升自己的写作能力，关键还是要归纳到一些细节问题中。比如托福写作中例证是一个非常重要的部分，在初涉托福写作的时候，可能我们手上根本没有什么可用的实例，即便是在范文中找到的一些例子，我们有没有使用的方向感。另外，在托福写作过程中，要逐步改变自己中译英的翻译习惯，尽量减少文章出现文章中“中式英语”的内容。这样不但可以提升文章的质量，同时也就大大减缓的文章写作的速度，直接用英语的思维方式去表达内容，从而提高写作速度。
篇2：找到提升托福写作速度的突破口 写作中表示喧闹的同义词
1.blatant
blatant，conspicuously and offensively loud， adj.喧哗的，公然的。
例句：It is not enough to give us the firm beliefs which we need to resist an enemy who usespropaganda as one of his main weapons not only in the most blatant but also in the most subtleforms.
翻译：它不足以给予我们坚定的信念，而我们需要它来抵挡一种敌人——他最重要的武器之一就是利用宣传，不仅最为喧嚣弥天，而且是诡诈阴险的形式。
2.boisterous
boisterous， adj.喧闹的，欢闹的
例句：Our cheerful, boisterous attitude infected the people around us.
翻译：我们愉快的，喧闹的态度感染了周围的人。
3.clamour
clamour， n. 吵闹、喧哗;v. 大声嚷嚷
例句：People clamour to lock offenders up and throw away the key, they demand vengeance andretribution.
翻译：人们都吵闹着说要把这些罪犯关起来，并且向他们丢那些钥匙，可能他们需要报复吧。
4.clamorous
clamorous ，talking loudly or shouting，adj.吵闹的，喧哗的
例句：The silent night has the beauty of the mother and the clamorous day of the child.
翻译：静悄悄的黑夜具有母亲的美丽，而吵闹的白天具有孩子的美丽。
5.din
din，a loud harsh or strident noise n.喧闹声，嘈杂声
例句：They tried to make themselves heard over the din of the crowd.
翻译：他们竭力让自己的声音盖过人群的喧闹声。
6.fracas
fracas, noisy quarrel n.喧嚷，吵闹
例句：The new wages policy caused a terrible fracas at the meeting yesterday.
翻译：新的工资政策在昨天的会上引起了激烈的吵闹。
7.hubbub
hubbub，a noise made by a lot of people all talking or shouting at the same time， n.嘈杂，喧哗
例句：They went there to have a nice, you know, retreat from all the hubbub of the capital city ofCuzco.
翻译：他们去那里逃避所有的喧哗，躲避战乱。
8.hurly-burly
hurly-burly，noisy ，n.喧闹，骚动
例句:To be perfectly at peace amid the hurly-burly of daily life is a secret worth knowing.
翻译：怎样能在日常喧闹的生活中得到完全的安息是一个值得知道的秘诀。
9.obstreperous
obstreperous, boisterously and noisily aggressive adj.吵闹的，难管束的
例句：The largest economy in Europe has been a reluctant and frequently obstreperous backer of the bailouts of Greece and Ireland.
翻译：这个欧洲最大的经济体德国一直是希腊和爱尔兰的援助方，早已表现出了不情愿和闹嚣。
10.pandemonium
pandemonium， a state of extreme confusion and disorder，n.喧嚣，大混乱
例句：There was pandemonium in court as the judge gave his verdict.
翻译：当法官宣判时，法庭一阵嘈杂。
篇3：托福写作实战速度如何提升
托福写作实战速度如何提升?加强4个层面让你写得更快
提升托福写作打字速度
其实小编丝毫不怀疑学生对键盘的熟悉程度，因为绝大部分人中文聊天时速度已经超神了。那为什么英文就是打不快呢?答案很简单，大家熟悉的是中文拼音的排列组合，很容易反映出这个声母后面跟着的是哪个韵母，这个韵母后面又该跟哪个声母。而英文就不行，考生对英文单词的陌生感远远超出了自己的想象，所以模考时总能看到他们不停地思考，不停地删除重打，时间也就随之流逝。
小编的建议是，每天半小时，电脑左右两边各一word文档，左边是英文材料，从词汇到句型到段落到篇章，右边是空白文档。先边看边打，再试着把左边遮去，这样反复操练，既提升了速度，又巩固了词句，提升了语感，说不定还能顺便背下几个好的段落。
准备思维模板套路
一个好的模板毫无疑问能够帮助大家节省时间。但小编并不推荐直接背英文模版，然后考试直接往里填单词的做法。这样做的危害实在太大了。首先对考生写作能力提升来说这是一个很不负责任的做法。其次对提分来说更不现实，因为ETS考官甚至包括E-rater(电脑阅卷)都很容易识别出模板举行，而且模版属于别人，与你的写作风格和用词习惯格格不入，这不是简单地填几个单词就能解决的。
小编在这里所指的是一个“思维模版”。你在写作前需要对议论文开头主体结尾段中地每一部分你需要往哪个方向写和想表达什么意图掌握得非常清楚。拿开头为例，大家可以通过时间对比，经历描述，引言，数据，背景，设问等等方式来建立模板。考生不需要全部掌握，因为实际考试只有一个开头，你不需要掌握所有方法，但要用精其中一种。
有的考生会把自己的“思维模板”精确到每句话，如开头第一句话写大背景，第二句话由大背景过度到解题关键词，第三句话让步分析反方理由加列举现象，第四句话引出自己观点。他就会在平时练习中反复训练这种模式，所以考试的时候能保持一个异常清晰地思路，从而节省大量思考徘徊时间。
具备合适的破题切入角度
比较公认的一个观点是，英文写作不好的考生，中文写作也不见得会好。托福独立写作虽然话题简单，却考察着考生较强的问题地解释和分析能力，虽然不需要有多深刻，但一定要具体有道理。为自己的观点想理由成了很多考生头疼的问题，要么是想不出来，要么就是解释的没有逻辑没有条理。从长远看，多阅读和多思考，多参加一些能锻炼思辨能力的活动是非常有效的途径。但如果想短期提升思考速度，就必须掌握一些常见问题的常规思考角度。
大家可以尝试自己归纳一些常见地破题角度，举个例子，一旦碰到“给钱”这个话题，大家可以先分两个大角度：给钱者和被给钱者。给钱者之所以出钱，第一对自身有好处，第二对方值得我给。对自身的好处又可分为两点来讨论，一是实的，二是虚的。如果这个“给钱者”是政府国家，“实”就成了税收、三大产业、就业、基础设施等角度，“虚”就成了形象、面子、精神、美等角度。其他还可以细分，在这就不便多讲。考生只要掌握一种破题方法，自然能够举一反三，迅速想出理由，提高解题速度。
储备充足的写作素材
材料就是文章的内容，这里只说一点，考生一定要有一个自己的材料库，哪怕是编的，平时编好总胜过临场发挥。有人会说我没有例子，小编认为这是不可能的。托福写作题目是有它自身的合理性，它能保证任何一个有过生活学习经历的人都能完整地写出一篇好作文。
在这里大家不要担心自己的事例故事不够新颖不够深刻，托福写作重点考察的是学术环境下的语言交流，而不是阅读量和思想的深刻性。只要你能把观点表达清楚，证明清楚，具体用什么证明根本不重要，合理即可。
托福写作：存钱习惯
【题目】
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
【范文】
The Advantages of Saving Money
Everyone must work to live, but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need. What should they do with this extra income? While it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire, I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.
By saving money, people give themselves more security. They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless. At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time. In addition, saving money allows people to build up a larger sum. They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away. For example, they may be able to buy a house with their savings. Finally, the practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future. In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.
Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately. Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants. However, if we learn to save our money, we can gain more advantages in the future. We will lead more secure and, thus, happier lives. We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.
【参考译文】：存钱的好处
每个人都必须工作以求生存，但是有许多人很幸运，能够赚得比他们立即需要的还要多的钱。他们应该如何处理这些额外的收入呢?尽管把钱全花在自己想买的东西上是很诱人的，但我认为最好至少把一部分的额外收入存起来，以备将来之需。
通过存钱，人们能获得更多的安全感。未来是无法预测的，或许有一天我们会失业。碰到像这样的情况，存款可以让我们免去许多痛苦，帮助我们渡过难关。此外，存钱可以使人积累较多的钱，可以用于买更有价值的东西，比马上把钱花掉所能买到的东西更有用。例如，我们可以用存款买房子。最后，存钱能帮助我们培养设定目标及为未来作计划的习惯。如此一来，我们一定会过着更有意义并且更成功的生活。
大部分的人会想要马上享用手边的钱。没有人想等到以后再买想要的东西。然而，如果我们学会存钱，未来可以获得更多的好处。我们将过着更有安全感而且更快乐的生活。我们也能购买我们真正想要但现在无法负担的东西。
【注释】
immediately adv.立刻 extra adj.额外的
do with处理predict v.预测
savings n. (pl.)存款 spare v.免除
see through帮助…度过 in addition此外
托福写作素材之天赋还是后天努力
Anonymous asks, “Which is more important to success, talent or hard work?”
When Talent Fails
Countless talented people fail. They are better equipped through some natural gift, some set of experiences, or through training. It is clear to everyone around them that they have greater competencies and greater abilities. Almost all of these talented people recognize that they are more talented than their peers.
The reason these talented people fail has nothing to do with their lack of talent and everything to do with their unwillingness to put that talent to work. Talented people sometimes believe that talent alone is enough to succeed. But being unwilling to do the work, they fail.
When Hard Work Fails
Some people who work very hard fail, but not nearly as often as the talented person who is unwilling. A hard worker tends to produce results through the sheer force of will. They're willing to just keep at something until they produce some result.
When hard workers fail it is because they believe that working hard alone is enough. Because they don't work at learning more and improving their effectiveness, they fail. I have seen many a hard-working salesperson fail because, despite their willingness to work, they wouldn't work on developing their chops.
Talent + Hard Work
The question anonymous asks supposes that talent and hard work are mutually exclusive, that you can be one or the other. But the most successful people are the talented people who work hard putting those talents to good use. They are matched only by the hard worker who is thoughtful enough to learn quickly, make distinctions that produce better results, and hustle to grow their overall competencies.
The only choice to made is whether you are going to work hard if you are gifted with some talent, or whether you are going to develop yourself and learn if you are a hard worker who lacks the natural talent.
注解：
固定搭配
are better equipped ： 装备有
The reason X.X.X has nothing to do with X.X.X, everything to do with X.X.X: 某事的原因跟X.X没关系而是跟X.X.X有关系
not nearly as often as ：没有后者的频率高(对比的时候常用)
are mutually exclusive：互相排斥
putting those talents to good use：使用好这些天分
are gifted with some talent：有天赋
并列结构(细节的罗列)
natural gift, some set of experiences, or through training：
天赋、经验和训练
greater competencies and greater abilities：跟强的技能和更大的能力(一回事)
learning more and improving their effectiveness：
学习到更多、增加效率
developing their chops：增加效率
learn quickly, make distinctions that produce better results, and hustle to grow their overall competencies
篇4：托福独立写作如何提升速度
托福独立写作如何提升速度?3个合理分配时间小TIPS分享
托福独立写作审题环节时间分配建议
托福独立写作的第一步是审题、确定托福立场、列出理由(只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由，防止遗忘)，最少3分钟最多5分钟。要避免两个极端：
a.用时太少，理由没有想清楚就开始写，不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清，还会引起行文中频繁的修正，欲速则不达;
b.用时太多，不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来。其实想出两条之后就可以动笔，各个理由的例证可以写到该段时边思考边写。这一点你不必怀疑，只要你的思维还是正常的，一定能做到。
托福独立写作正文用时细节建议
托福正文写作最少22分钟最多26分钟：
a.各段写作时，注意对段落的不同部分给予不同的重视。主题句给予最大重视，注意炼句，别说你不想写主题句，主题句可以使读者和笔者本人更清晰该段落写什么。各段中支持性细节写作不必遵循相同的模式。
有n种选择可供参考：1.举具体事例;2.说对方相对缺点;3.使用数据;4.使用假想例子;5.使用类比、比喻、引用等修辞手段来论述。哪一种你最容易想出来，就用哪一种。
b.考前将文章开头、结尾、例证、让步等各种句型背熟练，并且练习和模考时把他们用熟，要象做完型填空一样对待考场作文。别试图在考场上再去临时决定比如哪种开头好，怎样结尾好。使用自己选种的套话。
c.当被告知还有5分钟结束时，一般你应该已经写到最后一条理由，或者已经在做结尾。要确保文章有结尾段(不排除将它和最后一条理由的末段结合在一起的可能性)。
托福独立写作检查环节需要用多少时间?
托福写作写完还有检查环节要做好，检查需要1-3分钟，考生要有侧重点地检查：
a.句法：确保每句话是完整的，有谓语，且简单句只有一个谓语。
b.时态：文章绝大部分使用的是一般现在时;一般现在时第三人称要使用单数;使用过去发生的事例时用的是过去时;c.主谓一致按此三步，持续练习5篇以上，可以确保时间问题。
E-rater文章查重 托福写作模板还能不能用
根据上述大家的疑惑，今天就从四个维度来和大家聊聊托福写作评分。
一、揭密E-Rater评分系统
到目前为止，ETS是全球最大的测试服务机构之一。每年都能积累大量的文章数据，并不断地进行数据更新，其评分系统也是在持续智能化提升。E-Rater则更像是一个运算系统，能将输入的文章内容和数据库里的内容进行对比和批阅，这也增强了评分的广泛度和灵活度。
而托福写作中，E-Rater负责的Linguistic部分主要是是考察大家如下几个维度：
Organization&Development(文章组织和发展)：主题句，主题词等。
Grammar(语法)：包括主谓一致、单复数、run-on句子、不完整句子等。
Usage(用词)：冠词使用、介词、形容词副词混淆、单词形式错误、口语用词等。
Mechanics(格式)：包括拼写、大小写、标点符号等。
Style(语言风格)：词汇的重复率、词汇使用是否恰当、并列连词、长短句子数量、语态等。
二、E-Rater新出小动作
其实在11月某场托福考试中，独立写作题目下面特地用一行灰色的小字标注：Do not use memorized examples。不要死记硬背套用模板!根据目前各位小伙伴们反应的情况来看，ETS老奶奶很可能又建立了用于查重的作文资料库。这就不明觉厉了。
也就是说，网上那些流传的模板，还有你历次考试的试卷，都能在库里搜集到。只要考试时一套用模板，系统就会立即发现这篇文章和资料库里的文章有大量重叠。
这时候无论你文章写得再好，语句逻辑多么流畅，也都别想会拿到高分了。只要不是极低分就该谢谢自己运气爆棚了。
三、是否还有安全的写作模板
请提出这个问题的朋友们醒醒吧。
虽然很理解大家之前辛辛苦苦背了很久模板，突然不能用了这种感觉。但是各位真的不要再想着套用模板了!
连自己考试时写过的作文再套用，都可能得低分。更何况你是随手百度来、老师给的通用模板，都不知道在系统里出现过多少次了，分数只会更低。
当然，如果不死心的小伙伴，也可以自己尝试一下创作模板，写和别人完全不一样的。但这需要老师帮忙更改，注意语法语句等错误。
不过小助手还是不建议这样做啦。毕竟考一次托福价格也摆在那里，自己的时间成本也相当重要，没必要以身犯险哦。所以，模板什么的，请下定决心抛弃吧。
四、如何系统性练习托福写作
既然ETS做事这么雷厉风行，断了大家用模板的路，那么小助手为大家扒出一些托福独立写作的备考策略，希望能多多帮助到大家。
1、积累语料
虽然大面积的套用模板是不行了，但是我们可以学习句式啊。用一些好的句式结构，加上自己想说的语句，这样又是一段新的文章啦。
比如：A give B a huge advantage over C
结构来源：It may seem that this cultural continuity gives us a huge advantage over ants.
模仿使用：The low price of labor gives China a huge advantage over other countries.
2、不断练习，精进写作能力
总归来说，托福写作还是需要不断练习，精进写作能力，以自己过硬的实力应对考试的各种变化。
关于语法、思路内容方面的细节，都是我们写下来才会被发现。在练习时还来得及纠错，等拖到考试时再发现可就晚了。
基础比较好的同学呢，可以给自己限时写一篇完整的文章。基础不太好的同学那就就可以先练习不限时，或者写一两个小段落,熟悉熟悉各种词汇的运用。
好啦，以上就是关于托福写作模板的相关分析啦。小伙伴们最主要的还是要专心备考，增强自己的写作能力。这样不管以后ETS老奶奶再有什么变化，各位都能见招拆招，取得理想成绩
托福写作语料库积累：哪种朋友最重要
Thefriends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you canget help from?
你喜欢交可以给你带来快乐的朋友还是可以帮助你的朋友?
托福写作语料库
1. A close and congenial friend is what every individual aspires after.
拥有亲密无间的和志同道合的朋友是人人都渴望的。
【 点评】：…… is what every individual aspires after …… 是人人渴望的
【点评】：congenial friends = like-minded friends n 志同道合的朋友
2. A day without friendship is like a day without sunshine.
没有友谊的生活就像是没有阳光的生活。
【点评】：个性开篇，谈及友谊对于生活的意义。
3. a trustworthy friend n 值得信赖的朋友
【点评】：trustworthy = reliable adj 可以信赖的
4. Those who can go through thick and thin together with you
那些可以和你风雨同舟的人(作家文采)
5. a shoulder to cry on n
可以提供慰藉的人
【点评】：该短语是口语用法，比较地道，写作中可使用一次，体现表达的丰富。
6. a humorous friend = a friend with great sense of humor n 一个幽默的朋友
7. enjoy wonderful time together = have fun together v 一起享受欢乐时光
8.sincere friends n 真诚的朋友
9. intimate friends n 亲密的朋友
10. bosom friends n 密友;知己
篇5：托福写作速度提升攻略
考生在托福独立写作时之所以会感觉时间不够用，要么是在组织文章结构上有困难，要么就是打字速度慢。考生遇到这种情况，一定要分析自身的原因，寻找解决的办法。
如果是因为不会组织文章结构，那么考生可以认真研究一下近几年的托福写作机经，将机经中的题目一一列出提纲，然后参考范文，对我们的思路进行补充和纠正。之所以研究机经，是因为新托福写作考试独立写作题目经常会出现重复的情况，如果熟悉机经题目，考试中遇到原题就可以节省大量的思考时间。如果是因为打字速度慢导致写不完，那么考生可以在平时找一些英语材料，多练习打字，提高打字速度。
篇6：托福写作速度提升攻略
积累素材是备考托福独立写作的一项重要任务。如果我们在平时能够多积累一些写作素材，那么到了考场上就不会感到无话可说，写作速度自然也就提升上来了。我们可以参考一些写作范文，在学习的过程中把文中的好词好句以及例子按照话题进行分类并整理下来。除此之外，我们的亲身经历也是写作素材的重要来源。我们可以把自己在生活中的感悟记录下来，在相关的话题作文中当作例子来使用，会比摘抄下来的例子更生动、运用更自如。所以，考生要做一个有心人，在平时的学习生活中注意观察和思考，学会对事情做出判断和评价，这样在写作考试中就可以信手拈来，提高写作的速度。
写作想要拿到高分必需要提升托福写作能力，大家在备考中总是容易忽略掉这一方面。上文中为大家总了三点托福写作速度提升攻略，希望大家学习以后能落实到实际行动中。
托福考试作文独立写作范文：政府提升公众医疗保健
真题回顾
The mostimportant thing for government to improve health care is to clean theenvironment.
点睛
题目大意：对政府来说，提升公众医疗保健最重要的是去清洁环境。此题目为绝对词的题目，波波建议选择不同意，采用承认合理性，反驳绝对性的结构来写作。具体来说，承认合理性，即承认清洁环境在健康保健方面的重要性;反驳绝对性，通过给出其他可以提升健康保健的方式来驳掉清理环境是最重要的方式。
写作参考一:
Do you agree or disagree: The most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment.
As economy advances, the consequences caused by industrial development become starker and various environmental problems cover the whole world. Then comes one of the most serious issues that people’s health is confronted with huge challenges. Surely, a number of solutions have been raised and discussed and as for whether the most important thing for the government to improve health care is to clean the energy, I cast doubt on it.
Undeniably, cleaning the environment is an effective way to ensure people’s health. For instance, if the air pollution can be bridled, there will be fewer chances for citizens living in Beijing or TianJin suffering the respiratory diseases. Besides, citizens in Flint City could drink clean water if the water source was not acidified to erode the pipeline of tap water. However, the threats human beings are faced with do not only come from the environmental problems and the government has to lay more emphasis on the other two areas.
For one thing, the outbreak of viruses that could sparkle off widespread epidemics is a killer to human beings. Reflecting history can help us explore how the devastating viruses tortured human beings and the death toll was astounding. For instance, the once spread of cholera once caused the death of more than a million civilians in Russia and malaria is a kind of serious malady that could cause the death of several hundred thousand in Africa in the past. The good news is those viruses were under control finally after the efforts made by numerous medical experts. However, in recent years, people are still under huge threats of many newly found viruses like Ebola, Zika that still remain highly dangerous and could trigger huge damage to people’s physical health. Even worse, a reported man in America was found dying of Zika virus. Therefore, it is more urgent and indispensable for the government to invest to the development of medical technology.
For another thing, while analyzing the influence factors leading to the sub-health of most city employees, the deficiency in engaging sports can be found as one of the primary contributors. Therefore, there is necessity for the government to build more available sporting facilities nearby the communities for city workers who have to be fully involved in their career and cannot vacate enough time to either go to Gym or farther places for exercises. Take friends around me as an example. Most of them cannot afford to spend time in playing sports, one of who called Jason working as a software engineer can only get off work till 10 o’clock PM. Another friend of mine has to travel across the country for business trips several times a month. The combination of long-term involvement in career and no chance to work out lead to the obesity and the declining immunity. However, if there is a public Gym constructed around my friends’ residency, the possibilities of doing exercises could be higher and the physical conditions could be better. Accordingly, to maintain the physical health of citizens, it is more practical for the government to invest more to the construction of sports infrastructure as far as my friends are concerned.
In a word, even though cleaning environment means a lot to the citizens’ health care, developing medical technology and building sporting facilities can be more related to our health.
写作参考二:
With the gradually raised awareness of health, how to improve health care has become an issue of public concern and interest. Many scientists and environmentalists have fully realized the negative impact of environmental deterioration on the public health and propose that the most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment. However, in my eyes, the above viewpoint has oversimplified the complicated situation.
Indeed, a clean environment plays an important role in improving health care, because various environmental pollutions have posed a threat to the public health. To illustrate, the haze occurring in large cities of China has made thousands of people fall victims to respiratory diseases. However, it is a piece of overemphasis to claim that cleaning the environment is the most important way for government to improve health care, because there are other two ways which are equally important.
First of all, developing medical technology is another effective way to improve health care. Given the indisputable fact that there remain many incurable diseases such as cancer and AIDS across the globe, the appropriate technology of treatment and therapy is in great need. As a result, government is supposed to assume the responsibility of making progress in medical techniques, for the sake of curing the serious diseases and thus prolonging the life expectancy. The elemination of SARS in the year of can be a good case in point. Upon the outbreak of SARS, most cities and provinces in China are affected. Immediately, the government not only assembled a group of medical professionals and excellent experts, but also allocated massive investment in the medical research for vaccine. Unexpectedly, the emergency was perfectly addressed and the same is true of curing other diseases.
Besides that, government should place emphasis on improving the sports infrastructure. As is common sense, governmental support for public sports facilities can create a place for the average people to work out regularly. Obviously, the more exercise people engage in, the stronger their immune system will become. The sound immune system can serve as a shield to resist various diseases, which finally lead to the better health of the public. Take my own experience as an example. In my community, the sports facilities contain nothing but a track in disrepair and a swing for kids. In this case, the residents have nowhere to do sports even though they may be willing to. However, if the local government could invest a sum of money to build new playgrounds and establish Pingpang tables, I bet lots of people will become interested in exercising, thus becoming more physically healthy.
Fatoring what has been discussed above in, we can draw the conclusion that it is an exaggeration to say that the most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment. I firmly recommend that government should attach equal importance to the above three measures in order to improve health care.
托福考试作文独立写作范文：小学生应多学科技吗
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-11years old) technology (like computer) than teaching music and art.
托福写作范文参考:
The question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the elementary schools should teach? ” has never failed to attract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when it comes to subjects like technology, or music and art. Some argue that school should spend more time teaching technology than music and art. Personally, I am not in favor of this position based on the following reasons.
Admittedly, with the advent of internet and state-of-art gadgets like laptop, tablets, being able to use computers skillfully is being considered as a valuable quality. However, early exposure to computers and other kinds of technological products might bring lots of risks and problems to kids’ future development. Recently research by National Society of Psychiatrists shows that exposure to computers at an early age leads to addiction to computers when they grow older and obviously spending too much time in front of the computer can pose a threat to kids’ health, to be more specific, it leads to neck problems, nearsightedness, backache and even childhood obesity. Moreover, instead of getting addicted to playing on-line games and watching meaningless videos, kids should have spent more time focusing on their academic study, or even learning how to appreciate artwork or music. Indeed, spending more time learning art and music not only benefits the kids, but also it is conducive the community as whole.
First off, learning art and music at an early age helps to develop creativity and make the kids more imaginative. Actually, lots of scientific research in the psychological field shows that early exposure to art and music not only boosts academic achievement but also promotes creativity, self-confidence and school pride; kids who spend more time in learning art and music end up having higher analytical thinking and reasoning skills than kids who don’t.
Additionally, spending more time teaching kids music and art can can benefit the whole community. Music and art are a very important part of people’s lives. They are necessary for people to express their emotions, like happiness, sorrow, and even anger regardless of cultural background, ethnicity, age and even gentle. It is very urgent to spend more time teaching kids knowledge about art and music since they bring change, facilitate innovation and help to unite the community. They are the reminder of the past and maker of tomorrow, they also help to convey ideas and different perspectives. More importantly, art and music have great cultural significance, by learning art and music kids will have a strong sense of cultural identity and sense of belonging to community, eventually the traditional values and culture can be passed down to the younger generation.
To conclude, it is more advisable to spend more time teaching kids art and music than technology since not only can art and music benefit the individual kid but also it benefits the community as a whole.
篇7：托福写作速度提升攻略
为了避免出现考试答不完的情况，考生在平时就要养成限时练习的习惯，严格要求自己在规定考试时间内完成写作。有些考生习惯了在没有时间压力的情况下进行练习，虽然最后写出的文章思路清晰、内容丰富，但是这种答题方式不利于在考场上发挥出真正水平。如果考生在规定时间内完不成写作，一定要认真分析原因。如果是在思路组织或者打字速度上出了问题，那么就按照以上方法加强基础练习。如果是在内容展开方面出现了问题，那么平时就要注意多积累一些素材和范例，以便在考试中借鉴和引用。总之，考生在考场上要把握好时间，不要因为时间问题而导致失分。
